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the original of this work is a drawing from shimoda7

here's the link to the original:
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when i saw this picture i immediately wanted to draw it myself, so i asked shimoda 7 if that was ok with him.. even though i changed some things... obviously i made it left handed, because i am, and i made it look like the hand of a women so i could relate it to me..

this one's a simple pencil drawing..

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Submitted on: May 20, 2010
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Critique by =sam-guenther Jun 6, 2011, 9:04:20 PM

I think this is a very good rendition of a very famous drawing and you depicted it with a fine touch, while still adding your own style to it. Your variety of texture in the skin, metal, hair is very neat and not messy at all, and it's a very smooth transition to the sketch on the paper.

There's not many words of advice to be given from me, except I think that you could have expanded a little more and added your own twist to the drawing to make it "yours." For example, what I would have done was add a lit fuse to the ball, making it a bomb or something. But this is sole-y my opinion, and it's up to you because it's your creative venture. Someone told me if I was ever to copy from a picture, it's more effective if you make it yours, not just a copy of someone elses work, not that I'm implying you're just copying.

But seriously, well done, you deserve a thumbs up.

Cheers!

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