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old man by Mafin10 old man by Mafin10
this is from a photo i found a few days ago here on deviant art made by janadillo .. it was just so cool so i decided to draw it :)

here s a link to the photo: [link]
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:iconjennystokes:
I think this picture is wonderful and the fact *Mafin10 decide to draw it SO well is a credit for him?her!
The picture is fantastic but just have a problem with the pigeons feet. (It is small)!
I think there would have been more shadow because the light is coming from above!
Also under the old mans hat.........more shadow to the left.
I think the pigeon should have more feathers sticking out, it looks a bit like a 'chocolate-box' pigeon! If you look at a pigeon in real life it is a bit of a mess.............too clipped.
I have to write more: the man is old, he would have whiskers coming out of his face.
What I am saying basically that this could be a great picture with attention to detail.
I love it!
What do you think?
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:iconmayumiogihara:
MayumiOgihara Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Hi :wave:
Your beautiful drawing has been featured in my journal :heart: [link]
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Professional Artist
aww ^^ thank you so much!! it is a lovely feature :)
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:iconmayumiogihara:
MayumiOgihara Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
You're very welcome :heart:
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:iconoresma:
Oresma Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
nice work :)
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Professional Artist
aww ^^ thank you so much ;)
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:iconoresma:
Oresma Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
:thumbsup:
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:iconnimamoamaee:
nimamoamaee Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist
Beautifully techniques
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Professional Artist
thank you so much ^^
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:iconnoodles919:
noodles919 Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist
Brilliant drawing. I like your shading style :)
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Professional Artist
thank you very much ^^
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:icondogcatpie:
DogCatPie Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Wonderful drawing!
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional Artist
thank you sooo much :)
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:iconmarcgosselin:
marcgosselin Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Wonderful!
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Professional Artist
thank you!!
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:iconmarcgosselin:
marcgosselin Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
You're quite welcome.
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:iconrentowillem:
Rentowillem Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great!
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Professional Artist
thank you very much :)
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:iconursaminor45:
UrsaMinor45 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This made me think of my father. Thank you.
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Professional Artist
ooh i m really glad you can relate to it :) i m really glad you like it!! and thans for the comment ;)
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:iconpesulimasean:
pesulimasean Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing, i like this pict!
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011  Professional Artist
thank you so much :)
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:iconpesulimasean:
pesulimasean Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome, i like your design!
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:iconmoo-mez:
Moo-mez Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing!
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011  Professional Artist
thank you very much ^^
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:iconmoo-mez:
Moo-mez Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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:iconbommelz:
Bommelz Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
Wow...it made me a bit speechles
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2011  Professional Artist
oooh gosh ^^ thank you so much!! im really glad you liked it!!
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:iconjoilieder:
Joilieder Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011
Very true to the photo taken by JanaDillo (she should have credit). I'm personally excited about the dark outline of the pigeon and hat, but you've done a marvelous job. :clap:
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Professional Artist
thank you so much.. and youre right, i did credit her now, i forgot i usually do that ^^ thanks for reminding me :) i guess you wanted to say youre personally NOT excited about the outlines?! ^^ and neither am i but honestly i was just lo lazy to do it better.. but i think i might work on it again some time soon when i ve got mor freetime :) anyways thanks a lot for the comment and your opinion ^^
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:iconmoonlitemeadows:
MoonliteMeadows Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. It looks exactly like the original. Very spot on ^^
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Professional Artist
thank you so much i m glad you like it!!
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:iconmoonlitemeadows:
MoonliteMeadows Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob
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:icon00wolfie00:
00Wolfie00 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011
O.O mega..!!!hues du dat mam bleisteft gezeechent??
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Professional Artist
ehm jo dat ass bleisteft.. also ech zeechnen jo emmer mat sou minnenbleisteft ^^ an merci nach eng keier ;)
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:icon00wolfie00:
00Wolfie00 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011
heeh ech haat geduet du hess en zaubersteft x)
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Professional Artist
yay dat ass awer leif ^^ vlait ass en dat och an ech wees neischt dovun.. passen besser op dat ech en net verleiren :p
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:icon00wolfie00:
00Wolfie00 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
jojo du muss ganz gudd drop oppassen!!! o.o mach en leiwer an eng schatztruhe dei net mool bei enger explosioun futti geet XD
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011  Professional Artist
haha jo ^^ mol kucken wou ech sou eng kreien ;)
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:icon00wolfie00:
00Wolfie00 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011
gudd gudd XD
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:iconrumbleratko:
RumbleRatko Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011
The motive is inspiring! The drawing anyways. Thank you!
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011  Professional Artist
thanks a lot ^^ i m glad you like it!!
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:iconeclecticcalico:
EclecticCalico Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Professional General Artist
I pretty much disagree with the critique by jennystokes. haha I looked at the original and this is right-on. I love how you did the texture of his coat. In fact, all the textures are wonderfully different giving it tangibility. This is my favorite work of yours and one of my favorites on dA. Wonderful!
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Professional Artist
oh thank you very much ^^ i m so glad you like it!! well yeah you know i dont fully agree with the critique either especially when it comes to the size of the bird, because i drew just the way it was in the original.. but you know, every one s opinion is appreciated as long as it seems fair ;) thank you again soo much for the nice words and all the faves again :)
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:iconeclecticcalico:
EclecticCalico Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Professional General Artist
I don't think they even looked at the original!?
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Professional Artist
probably not.. but is saw a few days ago that the link was broken.. maybe thats why?!but i fixxed it now ^^
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:iconsonia-p:
sonia-p Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011
it is a great work.
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011  Professional Artist
thank you very much ^^ also for the fave :)
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:iconfeartakyuubi:
Feartakyuubi Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011  Student General Artist
I really like this.
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011  Professional Artist
thank you very much ^^
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:iconfeartakyuubi:
Feartakyuubi Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011  Student General Artist
You're welcome.
He reminds me of my grandpa.
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