katniss and peeta w.i.p

I will say this every time I write a critique for you, I LOVE your work. So on with this on... Your shading on Peeta seems a bit too harsh and angular. I know that his face has sharper edges than Katniss, but I caution you. He looks a bit flat and the shadows make him look like his cheek is sunken in a bit and his temple is a bit too far out. Katniss however is spot on. The apples of her cheeks have that shine to them as the light hits them, she's got. I notice that her hair seems a bit flat mostly in the back (Not flat as in if it were real, it were actually flat) it doesn't have much other color to it, and I know that there is little to no light back there, but it'd help to have the overall hair a bit lighter so that you can adjust that, make your lines to make her braids, their curves, etc. Still love everything, keep up the good work! I also heard Panem's anthem when I first looked at this.