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katniss by Mafin10 katniss by Mafin10
so this is another portrait of jennifer lawrence as katniss i did today ^^ hg for the win :)

mediums used : STAEDTLER "mars micro" mechanical pencils
widths: 0.3, 0.5, 0.7

*katniss belongs to suzanne collins*
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:iconarista-from-my-book:
I've already critiqued one of your works and I've seen a ton of your other works. I admire your work and think that you have such talent. I don't want to discourage you at all in your work, just help you better yourself in it. So, here we go with the real critique. I love every little thing about this, the shine in her eyes, the small blemishes on her skin, and the fly away hairs you've carefully put in. I just have to complain ever so slightly about her eyes. I know that no ones' eyes are perfect, but with this, I feel like her right one (the one on the left) is correct while her left one (The one on the right) is a bit too wide and the overall shape seems a bit off. The shine in that one is excellent as well, but you can't really tell where her iris is from her pupil or where the edge of her eyeball meets her eyelid in the upper center of that eye. I know that that eye is closer than her right one, but it still seems just off because I've always known for her eyes to have a bit of a drawn down outer corner, giving her a sad appearance unless she's smiling rather broadly. Again, I LOVE this but that is what I have to say
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maironmatos Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015
Awesome! I love it!
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maironmatos Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015
Fantastic!
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
thank you so much ^^
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:iconquiettigress:
QuietTigress Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this. It looks so real and is accurate. You captured her wonderfully!
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
thank you so much ^^ i really apprectiate the comment and i m glad you like it!!
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737Dynoma4 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just want to point out that you're an amazing artist, and scratch out my earlier comment. It doesn't quite fit what I'm trying to say. What I'm trying to say is that you have a talent for art, and should keep going. Keep going with the Hunger Games fanwork - I am hooked with the trilogy as well as your art!
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
aww ^^ thank you so much for this!!! it is so nice to have this kind of support :) i m really glad you enjoy my art!!
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737Dynoma4 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I AM OBSESSED WITH THE HUNGER GAMES. This is blowing my mind. How do you draw like this? Anyway, this is so impressive and I can't say anything else besides, 'Katniss is awesome'. 
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK.
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TimberSlashWolf Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh,that look's so much like a photo!!Amazing job:clap:
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
many, many thanks ;)
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:icontimberslashwolf:
TimberSlashWolf Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your very welcome!!:D
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ForestEdgeFineArt Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
I love the loose expressive style of your drawing.
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
aww ^^ thank you very much!! i m glad you like it :)
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DrowningInSoundWaves Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
I like your scratched/hatching shading. I love how easy it is to idetify without even seeing the title. The eyes are made favorite; one's really drawn to them, and they seem to sparkle. The shading of the shirt's wrinkles and neck are very detailed. How long did this take?
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thank you so much for taking time to write such a sweet comment ;) i m glad you like my hatching technique!! i m always glad to hear people still appreciate this kind of technique ^^ yeah, the eyes are my favourite too!! well, i think about 10 hours, i cant remember exactly...
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drawingsofaunicorn Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Love it!!!
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thank you sooo much ^^ i m really glad you like it!
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Lola-luvs-cookies Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Omg this is soooo awesome
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
aww ^^ thank you very much :)
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Lola-luvs-cookies Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student General Artist
U welcome!!
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AircatSkylion Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is astounding! Great job!
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thank you so much :)
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:iconblackrosedragon44:
BlackRoseDragon44 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Just amazing! This is like looking in a photograph of her! I wish I had your talent. :)
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
well, thank you soooo much :) i m really glad you like it ^^
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:icondmagdi:
Dmagdi Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You have Great Detail.. in your work... I admire that...
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
well, thank you so much, i appreciate the support ^^
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Teampeetacat Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
D8 omfg
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
haha ^^ thank you :)
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Anaiya12 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is so amazing!!!+
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
aww ^^ thank you soo much :)
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:iconlariposa:
Lariposa Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
i like this one very much, because you somehow really catched the moment.. and the sadness but also the bravery in her eyes! you're facial expressions are perfect anyway :)
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
well, thank you so much!! i m glad you like the drawing :) and i appreciate that you notcied the emotions i was trying to convey in the picture!
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Lariposa Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
you're welcome :) thanks to you for creating this! xD
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Art-is-my-Lif3 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
thats really good
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thank you very much :)
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:iconnutellamuffin:
nutellamuffin Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
This is really amazing!
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
aww :) thank you so much !
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AkaiTsukiYuki Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I wish I can draw this much detail.
Love the Books <3
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thank you soo much ^^ yeah, me too!!
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AkaiTsukiYuki Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Your very welcome :)))))
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javiernp91 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Looks like she's at least 35 years old.
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
oh :( well, that was definitely not what i was going for.. thanks for the feedback though...
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:iconjaviernp91:
javiernp91 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Professional Writer
Still a good drawing nonetheless.
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
well, thanks ^^
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sara123martinez Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
omg¡¡¡ you are amazing¡¡ it´s perfect <3 <3< <3
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
aww ^^ thank you so much.. i m glad you like it :)
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TheRealNamine Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
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TheRealNamine Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
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:iconmafin10:
Mafin10 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
uuuhm... okay.. why did you post this link?
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Hama-Girl Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She looks so mature here. Very well drawn, I absolutely love it.
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